'New' Designer Feedback.

RyanJames

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Hi,

Im new to the forum and would really love a little bit of feedback from people who know what they are talking about.

Im in kind of a difficult and unusual position at the moment as i just sort of fell into the design industry about 10 years ago. Im 29 now and in university with a group of 19 and 20 year olds which is a bit strange for me but I love it. Juggling studying between work and 2 little boys aged 3 & 4 has been tough but really enjoyable.
I was always interested in advertising from about the age if 14/15 but didn’t really know what kind of career i could pursue and at the time in school Graphic Design wasn’t an option to study and to be honest i don’t even really think i knew it existed, then when i was 19 i was lucky enough to land a job in a small publishing house making layouts and adverts for magazines. I had no experience and as i was replacing an out going designer i did not have the chance to learn from anyone and basically had to teach myself everything and learn as i went along.
After about 8 years of learning about the publishing industry and teaching myself as much as I could in my spare time i began to realise that i was more of a paste up artist than a real graphic designer so i decided to go and study to obtain the qualifications to go along with my experience and hopefully further my career. My employers were fantastic and allowed me to work my hours around my studies and work from home at night or like you say the early hours.

Unfortunately in August just as i started my 2nd year of a 3 year course the publishing house closed down and I have been left with a decision to either pack in uni and find a full time job or try and struggle it out for the next 2 years trying to get bits of work wherever i can around studying. I think this current brief we have been given in uni could work out great for me as it will give me a chance to work on my personal branding which may also help me to forge a career as a freelance designer so i really want to make it as good a it possibly can be. I have just used Muse for the first time to make my site which is www.ryanthedesigner.uk

I would really love it if anyone can give me some constructive criticism on the work i have on my site and let me know if any projects are particularly strong or weak. Its always nice hearing that my stuff is cool from friends and family but i think the opinion of designers holds a lot more weight so that is all I'm really after should anyone have the time.

Thanks in advance my website is www.ryanthedesigner.uk and i also have some stuff on behance.
https://www.behance.net/ryanjameswilson
Ryan
 
Hi Ryan,

first of all welcome :) It's good to have you here!

I had a look at your site and the artwork leaves a good impression :)

here are some technical issues I found:

1. It takes quite some time to load ( you might wand to check your image sizes and attached files and fonts)
2. You really need to test your site, in different sizes browsers and platforms! for example this happens when you open up on a laptop screen (please see attached)
3. The landing page is a dinky bit confusing, once you drill down into your sub pages you are presented with a menu on the top left which is a great help :)

In general I love your typesetting and the projects, I can't see any issue why someone should not hire you. I would recommend using fonts whenever possible, instead of images and if you need to use images, maybe look at .svg to achieve a better quality. You would be very surprised what you can achieve with CSS and web-fonts though :)

I hope this is a little help, if you need any help, please get in touch :)
take care!!
 

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Thanks so much for taking the time to look at my stuff Ash.
I cant seem to figure out how to rectify the problem with the different size browsers yet but I'm sure ill get there eventually, i may just get rid of the background image and try and just keep it simpler for the time being, i have made things responsive on the site but obviously not done it correctly.

On the work front is there anything you think could be missing with regard to a type of project ? or anything you think ive got on there which may do more harm than good?

Thank you for your advice.

Ryan
 
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