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Needing help with type please


#1
So I'm studying Graphic Design, and am not the best with type yet I must admit haha :)







I'm just not feeling the type, its too bunched up in a corner for my liking, even the typeface doesn't feel right compared to the images/style to me.

Any suggestions would be great, Thanks! :)
 

Dave L

Well-Known Member
#2
Doesn't look too bad to me, but with type aligned top-left like that, I generally like the top margin to be at least equal to the left-hand margin and I'd prefer the date to be on one line (this will also improve the overall shape of the title).
 

Paul Murray

Moderator
Staff member
#3
The black type at the bottom stand out because it's a completely different face, and it's black, which doesn't feature anywhere else in the design. Try picking a hue from the actual image itself (a dark blue maybe?) and play around with the typeface.