Thanks! How would you suggest making them less busy? Is it too much copy? I was thinking of splitting each poster into two, where the sans serif copy would be on its own poster, and the handwriting/image would be on the other.Posters should be quick get the message as you walk by - these need to be studied a little bit - would be ok for a magazine - but as a poster it's too busy, as already mentioned.
Thanks! How do you suggest making them less busy? I was thinking of splitting each poster into two, where one would solely be the sans serif copy, and the second would be the accompanying image and annotations.Yeah, a bit busy. Same as before really, image choice and font choice. Bit more punch.
It's probably because they are mostly black and white, but they look very dated to me.