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My portfolio Web page

Discussion in 'Website Design Critique:' started by tabakera, Mar 25, 2010.

  1. tabakera

    tabakera Junior Member

    Stefan Tomasevic Portfolio

    Hi everyone, this is Web page with my work, and it's the first one I made. So I'm interested in your comments, opinions and suggestions.

    Thank you in advance.
  2. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    hey welcome to the site...

    1) make sure to introduce yourself (Introductions)

    2) I'm freelance, creative graphic designer and web designer from Serbia and this is my portfolio on print, brand, logo, illustration, photography and web design. Enjoy!
    - this is to small, well for my eyes anyway...

    3) more to come..but as i said say ello first, mmight get more responses

  3. tabakera

    tabakera Junior Member

    Thank you for advice, I have introduced myself.
    I'm new to the forum so I don't know the "rules" :)
  4. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member


    first page - I'm drawn to the blue button and want to click it, not the one with a bell which I assume is a play on a doorbell but it doesn't work for me.
    the text is too small to read easily on the first page too.

    The other pages - the menu jitters (ie jumps from side to side) which I hate and I'm not fond of the dual language pages, I understand why it's done but I think it would be better to do a design with a language switch button but thats just me.
  5. tabakera

    tabakera Junior Member

    The blue square is not a button, I wanted to make it gif animation, but decided not to because text on the left is already animated. The bell is enter button. Text is not that important to me, but I guess it should be larger.

    Dual language was necessary for my region, and I personally don't like separate HTML for languages if site has no real need for text, but only to explain some basic things. So it was a decision that I intentionally made.
  6. tabakera

    tabakera Junior Member

    Do you think that light switch button (lower right) is too much?
  7. Renniks

    Renniks Senior Member

    I didnt see the light switch button until you mentioned it, make it clearer what it is (where it is) or don't use it in my opinion.
    Also the blue square may not be a button, but I clicked it first time too...
  8. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    yes but it wasn't clear and I wanted to click on the big blue button not the light grey one.
    it is to clients

    But it makes it messy and more complicated for people to read. Why do most other multi language sites have a translated page over multi language pages.

    Lightswitch - didn't even realise it was there, it was hidden in the checker pattern.
  9. keith115

    keith115 Member

    the only thing i would fault it on at the moment is the nav bar/buttons.

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