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My flyer


#2
Hi,

It's a good start, however I would make a few changes.

- The text at the top is too long IMO, I'd take the key parts out and display them another way.
- You're using two different fonts, I'm guessing to differentiate between Wash and Valet, but you also have it in the intro text at the top.
- Things don't line up particularly well either.
 
#7
People are probably just waiting for you to stop updating it!

There's no price on the Bronze Valet headline. Is this on purpose ie cleaning a Metro/Range Rover doesn't cost the same).
This is ideal as a maintenance valet every week or two. Just a suggestion for the text.
I thought it looked nicer without the picture of the shampooey car.
Should Pre wash be hyphenated?
Tar Removed. Capital R in removed should be lower case.

Other than that very nice, just stop changing it every hour and expect people to comment on a bank holiday weekend!
 
#8
I agree - the one before you put the soapy Audi on it was getting there. I'd lose the 'film edge' effect around the pics - it looks dated and I'm not seeing the relevance.

And change the asterisks* for proper bullets • (option 8 on a Mac, not sure on a PC).