My CV- what do you think?

I like what you've done with the positioning of your name, but visually it puts me in mind of a nightclub flyer, sorry. I'd definitely remove the snapshot, and I'd maybe try rest with a white background and more muted text colours.

Content-wise, try not to talk too much. Cut down as much of the language as possible to the most important bits, it'll make it simpler and quicker for a busy potential client/employer to skim through.

Definitely fix the bit saying "Most importantly, I also learned the importance of..."
Keep the phrasing simple and don't repeat anything.

Another example, things like "I am currently studying a BTEC National Diploma in IT (Business and Web). I am predicted Distinction, overall" could be shortened quite a bit. Keep it simpler, you're not writing a letter on the CV. And the word "overall" suggests you have weaknesses in your work as well as strengths. You probably do, but they don't need to know that!

I'd replace it with something like:
Currently studying BTEC National Diploma - IT Business & Web
Distinction Predicted

You're not after achieving a word count or anything, keep everything short and punchy.
 
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