Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by pete.892, Oct 1, 2013.
Early stages but some honest feedback would be appreciated
It's a beautiful illustration.
The word "First" reads as "Evist" though.
Too much detail. If it's for clothing it will need to be legible at a small size. Google 'unicorn logo' and have another go. You'll find most of them are drawn in profile. Remember, KISS!
Simplify the text too, and have it running in the same direction.
Very nice drawing indeed but this is not a logo design, this is an illustration. I echo Wardy's advice.
Separate names with a comma.