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Logos - critique please

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by wbe, Mar 13, 2012.

  1. wbe

    wbe New Member

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  2. ARRIVALS

    ARRIVALS Well-Known Member

    If I had to pick one, I'd say the slice is the nicest. Although I'm not keen on the straight typography. Perhaps hand-draw the text on the side of the cake like you did on the other design. You can get more creative with this. The company is a fun one, not a boring, corporate business.
     
  3. CiaranGFX

    CiaranGFX New Member

    Would defently pick the first one out of the 3.
     
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  4. dixondiva

    dixondiva New Member

    I agree, the 1st one is my favourite
     
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  5. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    I prefer the second option, but feel you were closer with the similar option to this one in your initial post.
     
  6. ahcstudio

    ahcstudio Member

    Second or third (with some tweaks) for me, i don't like the first option.. it feels a bit.."clipart-ish" to me, but it only matters what your client thinks :) ask 100 people, get 100 different opinions, you can't please everyone, only the client matters!
     
  7. Stationery Direct

    Stationery Direct Administrator Staff Member

    Although it needs loads of work concept 3 for me is the best idea to explore.
     
  8. dedwardp

    dedwardp Member

    For me, I like the second one but don't think my eyes can cope with the pink text on the brown background.

    Would like to see it in a different colour though, think it looks modern and I love the typography.

    All three are certainly big improvements on the originals, though!
     
  9. wbe

    wbe New Member

    Thanks, Arrivals. I agree I can bring a bit more fun into it.
     
  10. wbe

    wbe New Member

    Thanks for you reply, Tony. Can I ask what did you liked about the initial version of option 2?
     
  11. wbe

    wbe New Member

    Thanks, Boss. I must admit I spent very little time on the 3rd one. The cherry bugs me a bit. I think it might get lost on a small version of the logo. And maybe the text at the top can be a bit bolder.
     
  12. wbe

    wbe New Member

    Thanks dedwardp. I agree. The pink is probably a bit harsh.
     
  13. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    If you post the original lot up again I'll have another look. Can't seem to find the thread.
     
  14. dedwardp

    dedwardp Member

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