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LOGO! (In Progress)


#1
I am working on this logo, A friend approached me and asked for a logo, for an up and coming charity organisation, I said i would do it free of charge as im still in the learning process and it would be for charity

Heres what i have so far.
 
#2
it feels a little dated if i'm honest.

i'm not too confident on the person having semi-circle legs/arms, what is it representing?

change the font face to a bit more smooth font and you're much further ahead though (Y)

plus i'd look at adjusting the green/blue difference, i don't feel they particularly well.
 
#3
The Brief was very simple, I was told, Not too colourful, not too busy, Embrace the world! etc etc etc.
Im currently still learning and experimenting though, but thanks, Ill look into it.
 
#4
TheNoone - I don't have any critism about the actual logo, but check the letter spacing/kerning in the 'One World, Our World.' it looks a bit dodgy and visually uncomfortable. Not sure about the punctuation in it either, especially the fullstop. Could you not possibly use a hyphen instead of the comma? ie One World - Our world
 
#7
Nice image, nice colours, but typography looks odd. Maybe have "One World" above, and "Our World" below (and sort out kerning as Matobo says). Try different fonts. Good start though.