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Logo Design - PLEASE HELP

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by jessicajenkins, Feb 20, 2009.

  1. jessicajenkins

    jessicajenkins New Member

    I have created a logo for a childrens theater - the client has requested a possible beanstalk through the lettering and the house from the three little pigs. I have created one to client's request and one other...

    Please let me know what you think...thanks!!

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  2. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    I definitely prefer the one on the left, although it doesn't really scream theatre, to me, more nursery.

    The left is more professional, the right more the run of the mill Childrens style, which may well be what she's looking for.

    Not sure what else to add, I'll leave it to the others :icon_smile:
  3. Timmo

    Timmo Member

    I'll have to agree with Xenonsoft. Definitely the first one.
  4. andyd8

    andyd8 Member

    I'd leave those if they cover the options he wanted but then throw something more simple. I've attached a garden theatre logo I found below. I like it because its simple and represents the theatre through its elegance and the obvious simple shape of a leaf. I'd say the key is to simplify it.

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    Last edited: Feb 20, 2009
  5. LovesPrint

    LovesPrint Member

    ^^^ What he said for sure :) Be careful of your details - thin lines and wispy bits will disappear at small sizes. Think 'it must be clear when reduced to business card size.' Reduce your colour palette.
  6. andyd8

    andyd8 Member

    Are you based in America? Sorry just thought the spelling of Theatre you have is the American spelling. In the UK its 'theatre'. Just checking.
  7. Stationery Direct

    Stationery Direct Administrator Staff Member

    Yes, Jessicas based in Savannah so the spelling is correct :icon_smile:

    I too agree with what Andy said.
  8. jessicajenkins

    jessicajenkins New Member

    Thanks everyone for the feedback! Yes, I am based in the US and that is the spelling he used (thanks though)

    I will def. consider everyone's feedback and post some revisions soon! Thank you so much!

  9. jessicajenkins

    jessicajenkins New Member


    Okay....I've worked on the logo a bit

    • reduced color palette and details to the original "beanstalk" logo

    • added stars to the the logo with the grass to give it a little theater feel to it

    • added a few others...please let me know what you think :icon_biggrin:

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  10. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    For me it's C. It works the best in black and white, although D jumped out at me.
  11. jessicajenkins

    jessicajenkins New Member

    sorry to overwhelm

    sorry to overwhelm you with all of these options, but this project is due Monday and I am trying to get as much feedback as possible.

    I have come up with one more option for the original request of the client (the beanstalk and 3 little pigs house) It's another take on the option "D" on my last post

    thank you, thank you!! :icon_notworthy:

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  12. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    The content is fine. It's too high for me though, I would make the house smaller height wise and drop the beanstalk down in size too, so it's more of a square shape overall.

    As it is it's not the most usable, with the changes to size though you could meet the clients needs well :).
  13. LovesPrint

    LovesPrint Member

    I agree with xenon, and I think this last one is my favourite out of your options! :icon_smile:
  14. dot design

    dot design Member

    Hi jessica, I know you haven't got alot of time, but if you get chance, just type out the text and have a look at the letterforms, there maybe some subtle ways of working the plants etc into one or two of the letterforms rather than fully illustrating as you have been.
  15. jessicajenkins

    jessicajenkins New Member

    Thanks Everyone!

    Thanks everyone for all of the great feedback. The client has chosen a logo which I have attached below...thanks again!

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  16. robinperko

    robinperko New Member

    A and B are very retro late 70's early 80's... has to be C as this looks great single colour, and in colour, is a lovely compact design with good composition, plus it also promotes reading and looks fun / magical.
  17. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    Welcome Robin :)

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