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Logo Design Critique

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by jamesdavidknight, Jan 19, 2015.

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  1. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    Hi.

    I am working with a Graphic designer on this project and I wanted to ask some critique, is there anything good/bad anything you would do differently? I want some help to feedback to him.

    Thanks
    James
     

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  2. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    The text below the name is too small, you'll lose it when the logo is reduced in size.
     
  3. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    Otherwise what are your thoughts, do you like it?
     
  4. CPUK

    CPUK New Member

    Maybe have one line of text under the name instead of two for example replacing "making it easy" with "computer solutions Ltd"
     
  5. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    Thoughts? Logo Design

    What do you think? A Project I am currently working on with another designer. What do you think? Suggestions?
     

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  6. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    Please only recreate 1 thread per topic - this ensures all critique is kept in one place and is less confusing for others and yourself in the future.
     
  7. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    Thanks , so what's your thoughts ?
     
  8. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    My thoughts are not something I wish to formulate to words at the moment.
     
  9. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    Is that because words can't express how bad it is or you can't be bothered?
     
  10. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    It's not bad, it's not great. I do a few things around here, one is to clean up and the other is to give my opinion.

    I don't have an opinion at the moment. So, I'll leave it at that. When I have something to contribute I will, but at the moment I'm tidying up.
     
  11. PriyeshDesign

    PriyeshDesign Member

    What impact or message would your logo create if you incorporate a lower case 'i'?
    Could the perception create a personal customer relationship?

    Further experimentation with font and colour could be valuable.

    Do you feel the line spacing between the names is consistent?

    Has the designer provided any other logo designs?

    How does your strapline help define what you stand for?

    Are you targeting corporate customers or an 'average' consumer?

    What do you want your logo to communicate to your market?
     
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  12. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    The company is targeting corporate company's and has A base of contract customers I like it I think it looks corporate I like the colours and feel the spacing is ok, the font was what I selected and this is the concept I pursued from the ones provided it's slightly different but I like it, what would you change ? Do you think it looks
    Professional / corporate what do you think ?
     
  13. PriyeshDesign

    PriyeshDesign Member

    Unfortunately I think your idea is unsophisticated and needs to be developed, particularly when you are targeting corporate companies.

    You are not thinking critical or creative, and I don't think you have done sufficient research based on the theme of computers.
    Basically you need inspiration to take this further!

    Please take a break from this logo design and revisit it in a few days or so, this will give you time to clear your mind otherwise you will eventually convince yourself that this logo is the finished product.
     
  14. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    I've Been trying for months and have had at least 5 different companies try and work on this its beginning tor gripe me
     
  15. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    5 different companies??? Odds are stacked against you that you're the problem here.
     
  16. jamesdavidknight

    jamesdavidknight New Member

    They have ALL been free-lancers, and the work produced has been completely shocking and nothing alike my brief. I am working with one guy right now who seems okay. But to be honest I don't feel confident right now, I can't believe its so difficult finding a company out there with a decent graphic designer that can come up with a decent logo!
     
  17. PriyeshDesign

    PriyeshDesign Member

    If I'm honest, start again...

    Start with some basic research like computer icons, circuit boards, computer brands, etc.

    A well-made logo starts with an idea but it's how you develop the logo into a brand.
     
  18. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    Ok here's an eye opener... a freelancer is not a company!

    I'm closing this thread - if you have a problem with your freelancers then take it up with them. Don't push their bad work on us good workers for critique, I think that's fair.

    There is a classifieds section on the forums, please read the FAQ before posting.


    Best of luck.
     
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