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Logo Crit Please. Thanks

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Esh, Nov 16, 2010.

  1. Esh

    Esh Member

    Hi, Just wondering if I could have you honest thoughts on this logo I'm doing for someone? Basically its a childrens party planner (girly pamper parties mainly) and basically she wanted balloons coming out of a box! My hardest thing was the font/type I would would say...Didn't do anything to it, just used a simple font to make it bold but childish/friendly-ish/cutish if that makes any sense?

    Any constructive critism welcome. Thanks


    Toya Belle Logo.jpg
     
  2. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    Nothing wrong with the concept (party as a product/balloons in a box) and the colour scheme obviously fits the brief. The font's okay too although I'm hot keen on the 'y' and I'd probably limit it to the trading name and go with something a bit more formal and understated for the service description. As for the illustration, it looks a bit busy/imbalanced to me (four balloons is at least one [and perhaps as many as three] too many and, being the same size, they look a bit flat). In short, I feel that you could communicate everything here with far fewer repeated elements, perhaps to the extent that it could be reduced to a single balloon with a single star on it coming out of a box.
     
  3. Stationery Direct

    Stationery Direct Administrator Staff Member

    I agree with the above, far too busy at the moment and i'm not too keen on the font chosen.
     
  4. Esh

    Esh Member

    Thanks guys I'll keep playing around with it. It would be okay as an illustration but is too busy for a logo and "you should know that" so I'm told! Its only the first attempt though and only took me about an hour so I won't be too hard on myself yet :icon_tongue_smilie:

    Cheers I'll update later :icon_cheers:
     
    Last edited: Nov 16, 2010
  5. Esh

    Esh Member

    Had another quick go before I go to work....Tried to simplify a little bit...not sure it's working though. Its the font thats killing me the most! :icon_hide:

    Toya Belle Logo 2.jpg
     
  6. charlieallen

    charlieallen New Member

    As everyones said before me, i like the concept and i do like the 2 balloons with the little stars aswell.

    The font reminds me of a 50s? french cafe, i don't know why lol.

    The one thing i really dislike (sorry) is the gradient on the box, i don't think it needs to be there, maybe just have it 1 colour on each side like a light pink and dark pink.

    Hope that helps :)
     
  7. Esh

    Esh Member

    Another font...:icon_dunno: lol

    Toya Belle Logo 3.jpg

    I've done a quick search on girly/princessy type parties and organisers, and a lot seem to use those comic sansy type fonts or italic/fancy font...i've tried one which is slightly more girly.... :icon_hide:
     
  8. charlieallen

    charlieallen New Member

    I like, i personally think thats the best logo and i like the font aswell
    :icon_biggrin:
     
  9. Stationery Direct

    Stationery Direct Administrator Staff Member

    I think it needs to still be stripped back much more, do you even need the box?
     
  10. Esh

    Esh Member

    Yep. Same for the stars and balloons. She likes it as it is now. In fact, she preferred the one with the 4 balloons but the font I used on the last one. :icon_Wall:
     
  11. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    Give 'em what they want, I say. Congratulations on a satisfied customer.
     
  12. I find it too busy...but if the client likes it...then I guess it's job done? :icon_smile:
     
  13. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    Just one other (late in the day) thing: that caligraphic/scripty font with the continuation stroke looks a wee bit clumsy with an outline applied as the point at which the letters join has an edge rather than a proper connection (I think it would generally be more effective if you closed up all the gaps for the proper joined-up writing effect).
     
  14. SparkCreative

    SparkCreative Member

    It looks a bit cliparty. As other have said, it's way too complicated - too many grads and elements. I'd strip it right back. A good tip - design logos in pure black to begin with then you won't get bogged down with grads and colour and you can keep things simple.
     
  15. Esh

    Esh Member

    Thanks for the tips i've taken them on board. I can't really go much further on the design as the lady knew what she wanted from the start and thats that! I'll refine it and do a couple other versions or heavily tweek that one for my own purposes...Well, I need to deffo work on my typo skills and work out some sort of process to follow with all projects - any tips welcome :icon_sneaky: - Ah well I guess I have to start from somewhere :icon_biggrin:.
     
  16. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    It's always the way it goes. The most stressful thing about design is possibly working with clients who don't understand it.

    I'm working on a 4 page menu, which the client just asked me to try and include another pages worth of food onto. I replied "It's a sheet of paper, not the tardis"

    Keep it up though, best to grin and bare it :)
     
  17. Helen

    Helen Member

    just remember who you are designing for.... not yourself and not for us...

    as long as it's what your client wants, then you have fulfilled your brief! :icon_smile:
     

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