Leaflet Design

[The Simulator]

Hi Everyone,
This is the front & back for an A4 folded leaflet I'm working at the moment.
All of the main info will be going in the inlay.
Anything majorly wrong with it so far etc etc?

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Cheers,
Mark

 

[Tony Hardy]

She appears to have a watermark over her face.

 

[Squiddy]

I wouldn't say anything majorly wrong, it's good. The only thing I worry about is the blue and pink colours, more so on the front than the back. It feels like they clash a little bit, maybe it's just me.

 

[Levi]

The only thing I worry about is the blue and pink colours, more so on the front than the back. It feels like they clash a little bit,

take it you haven't seen your 'advert' up top then
as to the leaflets... I'm not sure the woman appreciates her head being chopped off, personally I'd 'lower' her in the space

 

[Squiddy]

It works in the advert because the design isn't so busy and doesn't consist of gradients and so many different shades and tints