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Illustration feedback

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by MJ96, Aug 13, 2015.

  1. MJ96

    MJ96 Member

    So i'm going to be a Dad this year (for the first time), and thought it would be nice to start creating some animal illustrations for the nursary. I'd really appreciate some constructive feedback from you guys as i'm not the best illustrator out there. Thanks in advance!
  2. Wardy

    Wardy Well-Known Member

    They look fine to me. The lion could do with more of a smile maybe.

    Not keen on the eyes myself, might be better with just dots?
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  3. MJ96

    MJ96 Member

    Thanks Wardy. The eyes where made to look like they're partially closed with cheeks slightly obscuring the bottom of them. If that doesn't come across then it might need a rethink. Appreciate the feedback :)
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  4. @GCarlD

    @GCarlD Well-Known Member

    They look like smiling eyes imo, but I'm not an illustrator as such.

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