Hey! Logo feedback needed...

Does the stage curtain cut off element work?

  • Yes

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • No

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • Not sure?

    Votes: 1 33.3%

  • Total voters
    3

Kobe Watson

New Member
Hello! I'm new here and I am looking forward to any constructive criticism. More than happy to critique where I feel I can add any value.

So the company is a digital marketing recruiter and online marketing agency looking to build a strong brand identity.

The logo is not to be over fussy. Simple, yet stand out, unique and fresh. As we all are, right!

I am keen to understand if the stage element incorporating the cut away curtain works, and positioning of the words. Which version is the best starting point?

Colour hasn't been used at this point however it will in the final version. The digital will be a vibrant colour that will change based on where it is being used e.g website, business card.

Any feedback would be very much appreciated as I am a logo design beginner.
 

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Hi Kobe,
I'm new too so this is my first feedback at all!I prefere the version n°2, because the word "digital" better follow the guide lines, helping the human eye. I've pasted an example of how I would try to play with this word, hope it helps. Bye!
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