I also wanted to ask people to look at some of my work and give me advice on who would employ me etc like what kind of jobs u would think I qualify for by looking at my work ,and if I need more work added to my portfolio?
To me it looks like it could be well suited to posters, night club marketing material - posters, flyers, promo CDs/album art and so forth.
Depending on what else you like to do you could look at marketing/design in that field.
My advise would be to get yourself a proper website, highlight your best work, add an about me section, perhaps write some blog posts and talk about your qualifications, experience and passion.
You could do that well with a Wordpress site with a starter web hosting package.
My advice for the website would be to keep it looking clean and professional - with plenty of white, and let your style come out in your work.
To get work I'd recommend contacting companies - just picking up the phone and asking them if they have roles you'd be interested in available. You could ask for an internship or to see the work they do, offer to get involved for free even to see if it's something you'd like.
That's a good way to get noticed and get your foot in the door.
Be professional and let your passion and enthusiasm come through.
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