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Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Elans, Feb 23, 2015.

  1. Elans

    Elans New Member

    I'm currently working on the design and development of a flyer that aimed towards employers who are able to hire apprentices/interns.
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    I'm in dire need for professional and casual feedback from you peeps. I could use some feedback regarding the following:
    • Colour
    • Graphical Layout
    • Font/Style/Size/Colour
    • And any opinion yo have on the overall layout, appearance.
    • It would also be useful if you could write the very first thing that your eyes are drawn too when you see the flyer.
    • And lastly it would be great if you could give me your opinion on the use of the word "Free" in every day promotion and advertising.

    Thank you! ^-^
     

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  2. Jordan

    Jordan Active Member

    • Colour
    Its blue, maybe think about finding an intresting colour pallet to work with that will be more visually appealing.
    • Graphical Layout
    Layout reminds me of an HTML, with colums and text that doesn't have much padding.
    • Font/Style/Size/Colour
    Tahoma is a nice font it does get used a fair bit though.
    • It would also be useful if you could write the very first thing that your eyes are drawn too when you see the flyer.
    The first thing I was drawn to was the lack of space around the edges of the type.

    You should also thinkg about adding relevant images of apprentices that look happy.
     
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  3. wac

    wac Senior Member

    Start by addressing your margins. Nothing should be right next to something else so put 10mm or so of clearance around your paragraphs.

    Also, increase the line height of the text as it looks too cramped.
     
  4. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    I'll be honest, the comments aren't going to be pretty with this design.

    • Colour
    well it's blue.....and not a nice shade either for me personally.

    • Graphical Layout
    I'm going to guess you haven't done any design training, this is very 'high school' grade design, there's no padding/margins/white space etc. It also looks like it was made in MS word/publisher or a serif package rather than a dedicated design program (no serif isn't one lol).

    • And any opinion yo have on the overall layout, appearance.
    not very nice it's too cramped, it's also quite dull to look at.

    • It would also be useful if you could write the very first thing that your eyes are drawn too when you see the flyer.
    cluttered design followed by then settling on the twitter logo/qr code area...

    • And lastly it would be great if you could give me your opinion on the use of the word "Free" in every day promotion and advertising
    Free - when I see this I normally think... what's the hidden cost, nothing is 'free'.



    I'm also going to recommend you look at hiring a designer for this, it will likely work out better in the long run.
     
  5. Enamul hoq

    Enamul hoq New Member

    color and layout is ok but font should be changed.
     
  6. Jordan

    Jordan Active Member

    Really?
     

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