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flyer & business card feedback


#1
Just a small project for a business card & flyer designs.
Let me know what you think and if there should any changes made.

I wanted to keep it quite clean, but feel I need advice on my text layout
I tried to keep the type big (as i the past I have used text for too small for previous business cards)


Flyer

Business Card (side 1)

Business Card (side 2)
 
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#2
I think it's a good effort - the styling is not my my taste my I think you've created a great concept.

The only small thing I would change is to lose the gaps in the url between 'snap' and 'shop' I'd prefer to write the url as it would appear in your browser.

The letter H in Handmade snap shop is also very close to the Hallmark Cards logo http://cards.hallmark.co.uk/home.aspx?_$ja=tsid:13061
 
#3
funny you should say that; I did actually display the URL as it would appear in the browser bar. I was then wondering how it 'should' appear. I then looked on some general flyers for some inspiration and saw some with the address displayed this way, so I then changed mine as I assumed this was the 'correct' way.

I'll change it back (new i was right god damn it ha)

I didn't realize the H in the logo is the same as that company! will have to see if I can edit it to make it more unique

Thankyou for your advice much appreciated :icon_notworthy:
 
#4
I'm not a fan of the font used to write "handmade snap shop", in fact on first look i thought it said "handmade suap shop" and was wondering if it was something i had never heard of :icon_rolleyes:

Yeah i don't know where you saw url's written with spaces in them but that's certainly not good practice - stupid people will put the spaces in the browser and get nowhere ;p
 
#6
I like it, again not to my taste but a good job....:icon_thumbup:

The only thing I would have said is the logo text is way too much like Hallmark but sounds like you have that covered now.
 
#7
thanks alot for your advice! feel better about it now i've got rid of the gaps.
(i'm still learning about the what nots of typeography)

I really didn't realize the hallmark logo uses the same font, a shame! cuz i pewrsonaly love the font.

Its not usually the style i'd go for to be honest with in regards to you sayin its not to your taste. I just wanted to have a bit of a bash at a few different styles to find out my personal style
:icon_smile:

will have to post the prints
 
#8
Just out of curiosity...
Is it 'bad' to use the logo on BOTH sides of the card. I know its obviously better to keep it simple, but some odd cases like this I like to have 2?
can you get away with 2 logos?

p.s. and if anybody has any good creative business card site links to give me some future inspiration that would be great