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Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by cappelli1234, Jul 21, 2010.

  1. cappelli1234

    cappelli1234 Junior Member

    hey guyz im new here, n now im showing u my lasts works in PS, and hopellfully im gona get some good feedbacks and stuff so bring it on :D


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  2. Renniks

    Renniks Senior Member

    Nice art... any reason for them?

    Design is art if it has no purpose
     
  3. Jimlad

    Jimlad Well-Known Member

    Some look like forum sigs to me, Renniks. As a stand-alone image, I like the last one.
     
  4. Romack

    Romack Senior Member

    Pointer - Don't use Jokerman

    The only exception is when the brief is ironic, then it's best to team it with Comic Sans and 2 lens flares, maybe a 20px drop shadow...
     
  5. Thewholehogg

    Thewholehogg Active Member

    Yup, Jokerman is a no no...other wise good stuff.
    Did you create the line work for the first image?
     
  6. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    What is jokerman?
     
  7. Thewholehogg

    Thewholehogg Active Member

    That crappy font on number 4 image.
     
  8. Jimlad

    Jimlad Well-Known Member

    No mate he didn't, it's a Japanese amine character from dragonball z.
     
  9. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    We don't get a lot of signatures around here...
    I'd say the first one is the best because you make good use of the colors and the light on it is better than it is on the other ones. There is a sense of flow in it, which I'll just assume was intentional, so that's a thumbs up for you :up:

    The Paramore tag isn't very nice because the light is messed up (what's the deal with that big blotch in the corner) and I don't quite like the filter (which vaguely looks like Topaz) the render has on it. Furthermore the text is rather poor.

    The third piece (with the ninja) relies way too much on C4D renders and I feel that you've done very little with the stock. I know the stock, I've used it myself back in the day.

    The last one is pretty good, but that's a very feeble attempt at recreating natural light. Also some of it is too random such as the signature in the top left corner and the one at the top (middle). Also the grunge brush you used for it is very harsh, and as such clashes with the render.

    Keep it up though, there's some good stuff in there. The fact that you try to pay attention to light already says a lot
     
  10. Thewholehogg

    Thewholehogg Active Member

    I'll colour in somebody elses artwork later on....look what I've created!
     
  11. Thewholehogg

    Thewholehogg Active Member

    Don't get me wrong I like the work but if your going to create, create something original.
     
  12. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    You can't blame him for using a character he didn't create... That's how the world of signatures works.
     
  13. cappelli1234

    cappelli1234 Junior Member

    ya, the cell signature i did as a request on a forum that i used to acess, the others works is just somethings radoms that i did in PS, thx for the feedbacks and critiques guys, im gona work to get better n better :-D

    ps: i didnt liked the paramore sig , i posted it here, cuz its the only jobs that i have left in my HD
     
  14. as long as you dont get dis-hartend. we all have to start somewhere.

    Search google for tutorials, they will helpy you learn more methods :)
     
  15. cappelli1234

    cappelli1234 Junior Member

    sure, i started to work in photoshop by tutorials that a found, since then, im doing n trying stuff n learning something new everyday, as i said, i wont stop now, ill keep learning and getting better :-D
     
  16. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    I really didn't look at them that hard.
     

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