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'Femur' logo design

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Rebecca Whitehurst, Feb 7, 2013.

  1. Rebecca Whitehurst

    Rebecca Whitehurst New Member

    Hi guys... just thought i'd share my recent logo design... it is a design submitted to the following brief:

    "I am launching a Comedy Content site along the lines of Funny or Die (it will include blogs, video, pictures, and podcasts) but all the contributors are women. We are calling it "Femur" (as in Female Humor but more subtle). I am looking for a logo to reflect Comedy, Women, silly, playful, content (ick does that even all go together.)"

    Let me know what u all think.


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  2. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    It's not particularly legible from the thumbnail. How does it look in black and white?
  3. Katedesign

    Katedesign Well-Known Member

    The 'e' doesn't work...looks like an 'a'. Paul's right get it to work in black and white first - then add colour.
  4. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    The lips as an M is okay as an idea but I'm guessing the aim was to make it look like someone sticking out their tongue as an act of irreverence whereas this is more reminiscent of someone being checked out for a throat infection or - dare I say - waiting for a money shot...
  5. gprovan

    gprovan Member

    What could you possibly be implying? :icon_wink:
  6. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    That's between me and my internet service provider.

    ARRIVALS Well-Known Member

    Got to agree with everyone else. The 'e' looks more like an 'a' and I'm not sold on the lips being the shape of the 'm'. To me, the middle stem of the 'm' isn't obvious enough and the look of the tongue/mouth is quite reminiscent of the Rolling Stones tongue.
  8. spottypenguin

    spottypenguin Active Member

    I must be in the minority because I quite like it, that said the tongue is a bit too "out there" (I have noooooo idea what Dave means by a money shot :angel:) and the e is a bit unclear but it's a good start. (Black and white first is better).
  9. Julian

    Julian New Member

    i like it too, but would reconsider the tongue element. only because it doesn't seem to reflect a comedy site as much as a gents club. no one laughs with their tongues out. and it's pink too:D
  10. Scentless

    Scentless New Member

    I have no idea what the logo could mean. My 1st thoughts were that it comes across a something sexual. The pink does help that. The shade of pink is probably the only thing I don`t really like. It is good though
  11. eglynn

    eglynn New Member


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