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Feedback for memento timeline of building

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by thegodlygod, Jun 18, 2017.

  1. thegodlygod

    thegodlygod New Member

    I was tasked to create a memento timeline design for the old military police training school building that was going to be replaced. Any feedback on how I could make the design better?

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  2. Wardy

    Wardy Well-Known Member

    I think the circle idea sort of works, but it's made it difficult for you to form a cohesive grid, if you know what I mean.

    I'm not keen on the years being seen upside down, for instance, and the images and text need to be more uniform I think.
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  3. thegodlygod

    thegodlygod New Member

    Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciated.

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