Feedback for memento timeline of building

thegodlygod

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I was tasked to create a memento timeline design for the old military police training school building that was going to be replaced. Any feedback on how I could make the design better?
 

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I think the circle idea sort of works, but it's made it difficult for you to form a cohesive grid, if you know what I mean.

I'm not keen on the years being seen upside down, for instance, and the images and text need to be more uniform I think.
 
I think the circle idea sort of works, but it's made it difficult for you to form a cohesive grid, if you know what I mean.

I'm not keen on the years being seen upside down, for instance, and the images and text need to be more uniform I think.
Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciated.
 
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