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East Lothian Guide


Paul Murray

Moderator
Staff member
#2
Hi,

It's not too bad actually, but I'd look at the placement of the price (and add a currency symbol before it). At the moment it's distracting, and the first thing I see.

I'd maybe make the 'explore, discover, enjoy' larger too (and maybe the title too), and I'd be tempted to remove the full stop after the 'Everything you need to know'. That's just my preference though :icon_smile:
 
#3
Taking onboard your opinion and that of a graphic designer i know, my newest variation is this:
Please forgive the low resolution children as i still have to get a high-res from the photographer