hey all, been working on a logo for a DJ. basically he wanted a logo that is future/trance in font and wanted an identity with some sort of symbol. and seeing as he loves dragons i created a set of dragon wings for him trying 2 use the Y as a backbone for a dragon.
I like the wings but I think as you've centralised them in the Y the Dj and Mark throw it all off balance. I dunno, maybe I'm wrong but that's how it looks to me on first viewing. Perhaps you could separate the wings from the text (keeping the Y backbone) and see how that works, alternatively he could just go by his surname!
I think what you've done is good but it doesn't exactly scream DJ to me when I first see it. I think you need to choose a slightly different font. I think the wings idea being the backbone of the 'Y' is a nice touch. I'd also get rid of 'Mark' his first name, DJ DOYLE has a much better ring to it and will look better on your current design.
I think the logo looks good, I like the wings idea but not sure the DJ should be so small, probably the most important word on the logo so should be defined clearly. Try putting the DJ between the wings so it stands out and bit more. I agree with the above comment and remove Mark if possible. DJ Doyle sounds better and then the DJ text can be put between the wings.
thx 4 ur comments ill try and persuade him to remove the mark, as for the font this is the font he liked, im so so with the font and i agree with the "E" on the font its weird, but he likes it. ill get an update soon