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did YOU see anything?

Discussion in 'Chill Out Forum:' started by tim, Jan 11, 2009.

  1. tim

    tim Senior Member


    Okay, so this is next to idiotic, but never mind. It wasn't meant to be serious, just thought it may amuse someone in my pathetic attempts.

  2. berry

    berry Active Member

    I saw some bad justified kerning!
    But commendable attempt Tim. Now some big boy stuff.
    In terms of concept and an Advertising Idea and Proposition - The 'hero product" that your selling is YOU.
    I don't see You, or make any emotional connection with you. You are asking someone to invest in a living breathing entity. So where is it? Where or who is Tim? That's what your selling.
    Change the headine to Polite appeal for Assistance. Show your puppy dog face so someone says Ahh! Write it in the 3rd person ie; Tim was last seen wearing a frown looking for work 90 minutes commute time from Birmingham etc etc. Sell you and someone may buy you. Good luck. Now show me sad.....
  3. tim

    tim Senior Member

    lol i will do Berry :D

    your posts never fail to amuse me!

    As for the bad advert, sorry! It was an edit of a Police appeal after 7/7, it made me laugh, so I thought I'd give it a shot and post it here.

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