Critique required

Poster/ Flyer designed for practice based on a link given by Hank Scorpio: https://design.tutsplus.com/tutoria...in-adobe-illustrator-and-photoshop--cms-26075
and based on this photo:

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My attempts:


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- Does it have a vintage feel?
- Does the composition work?
- Do the colours work?
- Is Font okay?
-Which one is better?
- Suggestions for improvement, even if it means starting from scratch.
 
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