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Critique Please


Levi

Moderator
Staff member
#2
doesn't read as Irina to me, does she teach them to swim with dolphins? I'm just not understanding the reasons behind the design.
 
#3
The theory behind the design is that Dolphins are good swimmers you would say, and the hoop of the top of the i is the represent the goal, the goals you will be able to achieve with her as your coach.
 

Wardy

Well-Known Member
#5
It barely works as an 'i', let alone an 'r'.

Something similar could work, maybe with a water splash or something. Get your pencil out
and scribble a few ideas.
 
#10
Cheers, yeah even I thought it was a bit of a stretch. the hoop with a base is supposed to be an i, while the dolphin was supposed to represent an R but was more leaning towards a lower case 'r'. Yeah im looking into creating the r with a wave, but still not getting the coach vibe.