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Business Cards.

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by ch3tzy, Apr 21, 2009.

  1. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    400gsm Laminated Business cards
    client: evolve8 (myself)


    Haven't placed the order yet, wanted to get some feedback before I send to printers.

  2. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    I still think the logo looks too forced/forged.
    Other than that it's a clean business card, maybe a bit plain. Safe way to go but not really an eye catcher.
  3. Adam

    Adam Senior Member

    Don't like the font used on your name on the reverse i'm afraid
  4. eneyekay

    eneyekay Member

    switch design.brand.print with graphic designer iiwy... i really like the logo, but i'd prolly choose a slightly different 'e' so it's more circular and the tail alighns better with the cross bar.

    all in all, it's modern and clean which i like :)
  5. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    Ok, I've updated the image with the revised logo.

    I hope the new logo looks a lot better, yeah its clean and simple I did want to get the logo spot UV or Foiled but need to keep the cost down.

    Im 50/50 about the 2nd type used in the design.
    fonts used - Futura
    - Diavlo

    The reason why Im 50/50 is because I don't think it sits well with the logo itself which is more clean (hope that makes sense)

    I hope the new logo is what you mean...
  6. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    Yeah I like that. Simple, different from the norm as it's portrait.

    It really feels intriguing to me, I think it's the way you've only put the core details on there and the rest is just blank space, it works well.
  7. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Still have the feeling you're not really getting what I have in mind. So just a quick mock-up, didn't want to completely rape your work :p

    Attached Files:

  8. eneyekay

    eneyekay Member

    I just had a little go with messing around with your logo concept... this is more how I thought the 'e' should look... feel free to use, I have the .ai file if you want?

  9. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Oh that's sexy :)
  10. Calvin_T

    Calvin_T Member

    yea i feel rotating the E will define the 8 more
  11. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    cheers mate.

    I see what you mean, not 100% sure about it, but thanks for the mock up, I see what you know mean.

    Thanks for the time to have a play around with it. I did try rotating the 'e' on earlier versions wasn't really happy with it.

    Hi mate...hows your business cards going...
  12. jHouse

    jHouse Senior Member

    Uh. You'll probably lose the...sorry...cheesy sparkles at print.

    To be honest...I prefer this guys' original to this. The gloss makes the top shape look odd..:cry:
  13. berry

    berry Active Member

    I think the " e" loks great now rotated, but do prefer the straight graphic route.
    Also i think the card shape would be good with rounded corners to accent the logo shape
  14. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    Yeah, I like the rounded edges idea.
  15. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    its real...yipee got the business cards printed.
    Really happy with the finish and colour was surprisingly close to what I had on my screen.
    Job well done
  16. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Got any pictures? :D
  17. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

  18. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Not sure if I like the white space on the edges :/
  19. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    lol haha..I knew you was going to say something like that, :D all good mate.

    Design = Subjective = pain in ass!
  20. What mix did you use to get the black like that if I may ask!

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