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Business Cards


br3n

Senior Member
#2
I dont like the font you've used, I know you're trying to match the style of the illustration but I dont think it works, Try writing it yourself and scanning it or at least use a handwriting font.
 

br3n

Senior Member
#4
Also you could move the skyline illustration to the top/middle (verticle alignment) and bring up the black block underneith so it becomes half and half colour - will attract more attention and add a nicer contrast - could also act as a "body" space for the content.
 

br3n

Senior Member
#6
Also, I think considering that a business card is pretty small... you shouldnt repeat tile the skyscrapers - thats just lazy :)
 

Kevin

Senior Member
#8
tim-ater said:
So pretty much change everything :p
Except the colours :up:

I would also try something like br3n said, move up the illustration. And why not try a pink background instead of a white one?
 

jHouse

Senior Member
#12
br3n said:
Also, I think considering that a business card is pretty small... you shouldnt repeat tile the skyscrapers - thats just lazy :)
It hardly looks like he's being lazy with his tiling. An untrained eye would never notice that kind of detail.

Must say it does seem like you've got quite a few monotonous points against this little lad Br3n! ;)
 

br3n

Senior Member
#13
I totally agree J that its a small issue and he doesn't have to make any changes, but he wanted advice/crit so im just voicing an opinion. He knows I mean well :D