Aspiring Artists Logo [Facebook Group]

Fredskov

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I just did this logo for my newly created facebook group.
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A group for artists, web-, and graphic designers to share their thoughts and useful links, share their work and get feedback - The group is open for anyone to join.
Should anyone be interested, then it can be found here: http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.facebook.com/groups/338469136184276/http://www.facebook.com/groups/338469136184276/

Anyways enough advertising about it, as it was not why i posted it here. - What i'm interested in is the feedback for it (nod) I created it with a vision for an easily recognizable logo, with the arrow symbolizing how the members (hopefully) rise in skill and hopefully get known
 
I quite like it, but the arrow is too dominant for me, like it's too much for the A's to handle.
Also, one A seems bigger than the other. Would it still work if the arrow was going through the middle of the two?
 
Thanks for the feedback :)
I have been tweaking it a bit, but tried to keep the base idea.

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Not sure how it came out, but put it up for feedback in the actual group itself as well.
 
I agree with Wardy's comments above, as the original arrow was far too heavy for the logo. Your tweaking has created a much better logo. If, however I was tweaking it, I would lose the arrow on the left slope and I would drop the vertical lines in the centre downwards as you already have an arrow in the shape of the A's. Hope that makes sense.
 
I like the idea, although i'm not sure i like the outcome as i got it:

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Changed font to 'Aller Light' in the process
 
I like the simplified version of the logo but it needs the horizontal bars in the A's. I've had a go, your comments would be good.
 

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I like designsofhope’s design the best, the others just seem a bit too short and wide for me. Do the other members of the group like it as well Fredskov? You could always run a poll and ask current members what they prefer.
 
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