Hello everybody, I'm a female illustrator particularly interested in comic book illustration. I work on a few projects with writers but recently I have wanted to start my own venture. A more personal project in a different style to my usual. I am a little nervous and I figured a little bit of artistic advice/critique would do me good. This is my first draft, to give you some flavour. What are your first impressions? Good bad? Yawn? Should I stick to what I know? Any words are appreciated (Sorry if this was totally the wrong place to post this. I've been away for a while) Thanks!