Advice for developing logo? Pic attached

Dragonsfire867

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Hi everyone! I just wanted to see what you guys thought of a logo I'm developing for a friend-she's an English tutor with a Victorian/Pagan-esque aesthetic to her, she's highly intelligent and refined, and is known by her friends for growing tea roses. I wanted to play with a bunch of designs to see what would be best for using on a business card, letterhead, etc. and would love some critiques, but mostly in the form of suggestions for further developing the mark. All work is attached:
 

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