business card design critique

Hi all,

Got some great advice on some early business card designs from this forum, went away and worked on one of the designs and two new ones.

Could I ask for some more feedback?

Let me know which front and back you prefer (if any) and if there's anything you would change / swap around.



Thank you,

Front A - does nothing for me.
Back A - distressed text at this size will be difficult to print

Front B - Nightmare to print
Back B - Nightmare to print

Front C - Can barely make out ME - not sure what the symbol in front of it all is for? - Background would be difficult to replicated digitally each time in printing (consistently)
Back C - same comment in regard to printing issues.



I like the design of Back C - but I'd go with all white or all black background.

I like the design of Front A - but it feels grossly unfinished.

From all of these i highly prefer A. Even tho it feels unfinished and kinda empty.
I would like something more going on there its a bit plain.

Thanks for the feedback Hank. Had another play around with a mock-up and tried to make it seem more finished. Do you think this looks better?