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    Critique required

    Poster/ Flyer designed for practice based on a link given by Hank Scorpio: https://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/how-to-design-a-vintage-travel-poster-in-adobe-illustrator-and-photoshop--cms-26075 and based on this photo: My attempts: - Does it have a vintage feel? - Does the composition...
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    Concepts for 3 different business book covers

    Its a Goddamn awfully boring industry and laden with heavy regulation. I understand the difficulty in making it appealing. Lightheartedness will attract readers but perhaps detract from the seriousness. It is a scientific profession as well as a business. Maybe check out Bauhaus designs which...
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    Girlguiding gets new badge design to reflect young women’s lives in 2018

    I find it funny that wellingtons represents 'festival goer'...:unsure: But I guess its realistic in these parts...
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    Ideas for design of logo!!!

    You need to leave the house, bed, desk; get away from your perch wherever it may be and look around. Find the letter 6 in nature, or man made objects.....and go from there. No one is going to share 'unique ideas' with you :) , but rather, offer critique ( hopefully constructive) on YOUR ideas.
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    Portfolio of a beginner- need feedback for this assignment

    Yay! I passed anyway...Glad to be finished this course and finally design things I want and like. It was an expensive way to learn :- a little about Illustrator, Photoshop, Muse, Indesign I NEVER want to work for a company HATE the world of advertising. Must not give up my regular job - yet
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    Portfolio of a beginner- need feedback for this assignment

    My final assignment is on presentation. It was hard to make a cohesive theme considering the designs were in response to assignments. Also it will be obvious I don't have a wacom :) I chose Muse for various reasons. The captions beneath each are meant to create a more explicit story. -does...
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    This is the one for me. Thanks for pointing me to the website' awwards'...v inspirational. I haven't the resources to do what they do, but I have improved on this design at least. :)
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    LHS- I got rid of my girl and created belt instead. No jagged edges. Clean and legible. RHS _ My favourite, but need to change italic type and heading for purposes of legibility. Getting there...
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    Thanks a lot.. delighted to get responses :) Background is of market stalls. logo is large cos its my own design :) I will adjust the width I avoided focusing on the product cos I have no good images of handmade bags . They all look dreadful unless they are high end like gucci etc... I have...
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    Its not really homework Hankscorpio :) The assessors make us seek feedback from external sources . And what's the point in asking family when they think anything and everything is amazing.:mad: Regarding peers on the course. No one has responded. Its been 3 x days. The course, being online is...
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    There is very little support there. I have to rely on the goodwill of others and beg a bit. Tutor situation is not great and fellow students are at my level. There are no forums really to help beginners. We are too 'cringe inducing'...but I will keep plugging away. :)
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    Yes it is. I probably shouldn't post here as everyone here is at the top of the game. I always get ripped to shreds but it usually makes me come up with something better, ( that is as much as a beginner can.) Anyway ..gonna scrap this design and start again :) I will try not to post here until...
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    Yay...Thanks for response. Yes I balked at using Comic sans but read a review somewhere of an example of a good website and they used it...but should have stuck to some principles. I can def change the loaf of bread. It happened accidentally ..and I left it for dramatic effect ( haha) Yes...
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    static design mock up..needing critique

    this is my second attempt at a website...lots to learn... Brief: The Bag Lady.com.au is the clients registered domain - Client: John Simpson - sells handmade bags to a boutique market. There is no shop front as bags are sold all over Sydney at weekend markets. He says the average buyer is...
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    My first attempt - need 5 x comments for assignment

    Do colours and font work? - yes. although grey background for main image may be worth changing. Is there an appropriate hierarchy happening? - yes although not very creatively. Is the logo distinctive and appropriate? - it is okay. Does it look better without cartoon image? - It is now more...
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