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    Constructive feedback required for a logo design

    I agree that the top one is the one to work on, but lose the stroke on the font. It's not needed.
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    LOGO! (In Progress)

    Nice image, nice colours, but typography looks odd. Maybe have "One World" above, and "Our World" below (and sort out kerning as Matobo says). Try different fonts. Good start though.
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    new on here - this is my online portfolio

    Hi Your graphic design work is very good. However your work is very colourful and I agree with Curtis, keep the website to far more subtle colours, as it currently clashes with a lot of what you've done. A black/grey and white website would be great. Get rid of the red and blue. (You could get...
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    Good Eye for Logos? Need critique.

    Hi. I have feeback for all 4. 1) Not keen on the graphic. Difficult to tell if it's meant to be something or not. Also the font used in "Womens Health Care" doesn't look particularly evenly spaced - kerning and tracking need to be looked at, and the apostrophe is missing. All in all this one...
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