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    Micro brewery branding

    As I had a foil stamp mock up open, I though I might add design D in (roughly) for you. This sits with Paul's suggestion of gold on black :)
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    Illustration feedback

    Thanks Wardy. The eyes where made to look like they're partially closed with cheeks slightly obscuring the bottom of them. If that doesn't come across then it might need a rethink. Appreciate the feedback :)
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    Micro brewery branding

    D or E for me. I think either one works well but on all of them brewing company is a little difficult to read. i think the design looks great though and would work really well as a beer mat or bottle label.
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    Illustration feedback

    So i'm going to be a Dad this year (for the first time), and thought it would be nice to start creating some animal illustrations for the nursary. I'd really appreciate some constructive feedback from you guys as i'm not the best illustrator out there. Thanks in advance...
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    Feedback/advice on new personal logo!!!

    I have a similar logo up on dribbble at the moment which uses the three 'A's in the title to form a gable end roof https://dribbble.com/shots/2188895-WIP-Logo-Design I personally wouldn't have the text underneath fitting within the width of the icon as it will be way to small to read when scaled...
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    Illustrative Postcards

    Agree with everything above, these look great! I'm already following you over on behance because of this https://www.behance.net/gallery/9329891/Newspaper-Portfolio-Crowe-About-It Great work :)
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    Boner Logos

    Had to get a snap of this after reading this thread!
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    Winter Pride Branding 2014

    Looks great, really nice clean identity. One thing, for whatever reason, when viewing on my ipad the website menu bar obscures the logo. May be worth checking out.
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    Logo Re-design

    Welcome to the forum Scott. I don't think you've done a bad job tidying up the existing logo. Both Paul and Hank make good points about the thickness of text and the use of upper and lowercase lettering. Assuming they are not looking to completely change there identity, how about giving the...
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    Portfolio and Curriculum Vitae feedback

    I have to agree with above comments, this has a really strong visual identity. If I had to be super critical of anything it would be the font. You have these really nice spreads with great use of space, yet the text kinda feels a little tight and bunched together. Maybe some adjustments to the...
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    Logo design for EDM DJ/Producer

    Hi John, sounds good. PM sent :icon_smile:
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    Initial Concept up for critique and advice

    Meant to say 'depict a G'. Couldn't find where to edit post :icon_blushing:
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    Initial Concept up for critique and advice

    Agree with Wardy, the second version is an improvement. Maybe the squares need to vary in size/shade to better suggest movement. I think first and foremost though, it needs to clearly represent a G.
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    Logo design required

    Hi Lee PM sent over.
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    New company logo

    Welcome to the forum! PM sent over. :icon_smile:
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