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    My first portfolio

    Hey everyone, I am still a student about to finish a diploma of graphic design and I am looking for critique on my portfolio. I am still working on the copy so just ignore that for now. www.mollyblack.com.au
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    Album cover critique

    Hello, I have made an album cover for my friend’s new album she is about the release. She is a pop singer, with a big voice. She is a talented keyboard and piano player. I will be replacing the stock image on the keyboard player with an image of her. Her album is called isolate, and we went with...
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    Looking for feedback for improvement

    I am looking for some feedback on my student work for areas of greatest weakness. I want to find which areas to focus on to improve my skill. My next assignment has 5 different briefs that focus on different skill areas so I wanted to request professional feedback of my skills to see what to...
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    Wine bar project help

    Hey Everyone, Thanks for all your replies. I have made some changes to try and make this better. I look out some of the details from the budgie and the smaller icon logo from the round lockup. I moved the wine bar type away from the tail. I also coloured the budgie and reduced the stroke size...
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    Wine bar project help

    Hey, thanks I'll try that out!
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    Wine bar project help

    Hey, thanks for the critique! I wanted to use the smaller bird/wine glass for things that needed to be smaller scale, but agree with it looking out of place. I get what you mean with simplifying and colour, I'm struggling with the black wing pattern for sure.
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    Wine bar project help

    Haha, yes that's the whole joke behind having the budgie. It was the owners idea, and he's very adamant about it.
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    Wine bar project help

    Hey Everyone, I'm designing some stuff for a wine bar here in Australia. I have gone with a woodcut/lino style illustration of a budgie with grapes (client really wanted a budgie). I haven't added colour yet as I wanted to get the budgie sorted first. I have two options for lockup ect., and a...
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