Recent content by lukedavies

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    New Company design - Comments welcome

    Hi there. I like it :) Something I noticed was that the FB like button grabs my attention far more than your logo in the top banner. I'd suggest moving it, or making it smaller?
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    Opinions appreciated on new site

    All the info at the bottom is cut in half with me. Also, the first thing I looked at when opening the page was the right hand side, that has all the equations. Not sure if that's what you're aiming for. Also, there's a big space in the upper left of the webpage, it looks as if the 'What we do'...
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    Opinion on NEW Logo

    I would get rid of the texture and change the font for 'Graphics' and probably 'gibbons' too - but that's just my opinion. The 'Graphics' looks quite unprofessional. I'd also ease the tracking for 'gibbons', it isn't very readable from your display pic
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    Updated/redesigned portfolio

    I really like your work, the only thing I noticed, which you may be aware of, is that the grey colour around the logo "B31" is a little off with the grey of the top banner. Nice website though :)
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    Telegraph TV commercial video sting

    Nice one, I really like it.
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    Portfolio Opinions

    Thanks for the feedback :-) I set up a behance account last week - pretty confusing to start off with! Seems like a great website though. Yes, all logos are for clients - although a vast majority arent in use as I use designcrowd. Even though a lot of people on here will comment saying Its a...
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    Typeface Selection Help.

    Forgot to mention that the graphic is an aboriginal symbol. Incorporating it into the text without making it seem look awkward isn't the easiest of things either!
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    Typeface Selection Help.

    That client sounds... interesting! Thank you for the suggestion, but I think they really like the font attached below.. advice on how to improve the logo would be great too, I suppose. Although I should probably post it in the relevant forum.
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    Typeface Selection Help.

    Just received more feedback: Needs to be 'modern and sexy' - Using a serif font, quite tough! Not sure if i'd define Trajan Pro as sexy, but i'm going to give it a go.
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    Typeface Selection Help.

    Hmm yes I know, I'd agree that the second font works well and was surprised they didn't like it!
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    Typeface Selection Help.

    Hi everyone, I'm designing a logo for a travel company, and finding it very difficult to find a suitable typeface. Here's a link to the company website, which should give you an understanding about what they do etc. About Us - Gunyah Short Breaks Basically, they offer short breaks in...
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    Logo Critique

    The first one or last for me :)
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    Logo Critique

    I definitely think the logo looks better without the two rings that you took out. Also, aren't the colours a little feminine? (Not sure if you're aiming for an audience of women) Why don't you go for a slightly cleaner approach, using lines rather than circles? Although you've probably aimed...
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    Logo Critique

    Hi there. Without looking at the text I saw a graphic that reminded me of an abstract woman holding a baby. Something like this: http://identityview.net/wp-content/themes/identityview/templates/-6350-single.jpg I would tidy it up a bit as it also looks quite messy. I hope this helps :-)
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