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    sorry to overwhelm

    sorry to overwhelm you with all of these options, but this project is due Monday and I am trying to get as much feedback as possible.

    I have come up with one more option for the original request of the client (the beanstalk and 3 little pigs house) It's another take on the option "D" on my last post

    thank you, thank you!!
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    The content is fine. It's too high for me though, I would make the house smaller height wise and drop the beanstalk down in size too, so it's more of a square shape overall.

    As it is it's not the most usable, with the changes to size though you could meet the clients needs well :).

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    I agree with xenon, and I think this last one is my favourite out of your options!

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    Hi jessica, I know you haven't got alot of time, but if you get chance, just type out the text and have a look at the letterforms, there maybe some subtle ways of working the plants etc into one or two of the letterforms rather than fully illustrating as you have been.

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    Thanks Everyone!

    Thanks everyone for all of the great feedback. The client has chosen a logo which I have attached below...thanks again!
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    A and B are very retro late 70's early 80's... has to be C as this looks great single colour, and in colour, is a lovely compact design with good composition, plus it also promotes reading and looks fun / magical.

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    Welcome Robin :)

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