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    Thanks for all you constructive criticism so far it has been a great help!

    I have attached a more recent design for your perusal, completed identity to follow shortly...
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    I really like it! :)

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    I think that's working to be honest. Maybe the font is a bit heavy, but it's definitely nearly there.

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    Yes maybe the Top Font could be a bit lighter and maybe a litle sharper on the edges :)

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    I have reverted back to my original font for the logo, this should also make the secondary font clearer at a reduced size.

    What do you think of the gradient added too?
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    Getting there. The 'cleaning services' font looks too condensed to me. Looks fine for the big word on top but for the smaller letters below, I'd find a different font to use, one that's the same thickness, but where the letters are wider.
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    A yes from me.

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    Hope u don't mind that I did this, but I changed it a tiny bit (as I am bored). I straightened and aligned the straight bits of the shape.

    I don't know if it is like this because it is an example, but the edges of the rounded parts of the logo could be much smoother to.
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    I dont mind at all i appreciate all the suggestions and take on board all comments made, regardless of what time in the morning they are made??

    Have you used the first design to amend there?

    I have attached my final logo do you personally think this still needs adjusting as you mentioned, this concept has evolved from the first design to a more spherical icon.

    Thanks for input,
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    Some other changes I thought would look nice in my opinion.
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