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    PC Repair Leaflet

    Hello, just a quick showcase of a leaflet i have made on illustrator. This is my first leaflet I've made so constructive criticism wanted please. :icon_thumbup:

    NOTE: I have provided it in a low res to prevent copyright infringement the original is crisp and smooth

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    I like it and think it has a friendly feel about it. It is much better than most of the 'printed on a photocopier' stuff we get through our door from computer repair companies in Bristol. As a certain member of this forum keeps saying to me though, watch your capital letters for consistency. I.e. why is PC Upgrade using capitals on both words whereas Error fixing isn't?

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    Did you remember to add bleed?

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    Nice and friendly looking. You should get your own domain name :icon_thumbup:
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    Quote Originally Posted by Boss Hog View Post
    Did you remember to add bleed?
    I have now, this version didin't because the printing company hadn't replied to me. The final version has now

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    Quote Originally Posted by Corrosive View Post
    I like it and think it has a friendly feel about it. It is much better than most of the 'printed on a photocopier' stuff we get through our door from computer repair companies in Bristol. As a certain member of this forum keeps saying to me though, watch your capital letters for consistency. I.e. why is PC Upgrade using capitals on both words whereas Error fixing isn't?
    Thanks, I see what you mean. Unfortunately I've sent off a final version to the printer now. I guess I'll just have to learn for future work :icon_thumbup:

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    Who you using for print? Check us out next time > Leaflets

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    I've used a company called Five Eight PrintI managed to get 100 A5 leaflets on 135gsm gloss paper for £7.20 inc P+P which is ideal for me at the moment as I want to do a quick and cheap leaflet drop in my area for the business I am starting.

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    Just one more thought (and I know you've sent it so one for next time). Where you mention saving money getting a hand-built PC perhaps another hook might also be a better spec for your budget than you'd get at (wash my mouth out) PC World.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RJC Design View Post
    Hello, just a quick showcase of a leaflet i have made on illustrator. This is my first leaflet I've made so constructive criticism wanted please. :icon_thumbup:

    NOTE: I have provided it in a low res to prevent copyright infringement the original is crisp and smooth
    Just a couple of things I've noticed:

    • The "I come to you and will do my best..." line doesn't line up with the paragraph above it on the left hand side.
    • The text on the prices note is very close to the left hand side, I would bring it in a bit


    I'm not a fan of the colours used to be honest I think they could have been more complimentary to each other as the red and yellow in the background (I think) dates the design a bit, as does the gradient effect used. However, as it's already been sent, I guess this is all just stuff to consider next time, and as folk have said, it's better than most stuff that comes through the door xx
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