Thread: Logo Positioning

Please not that this is NOT finished yet and i need to touch up the type, please ignore that for now....
Its the front side of a business card.

I really wanted to keep the lone under photography as I will be using similar on the back for email/site/tel

Does this logo need positioning more upwards in the middle at all or does it look OK as it is?

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/b...ION2-FRONT.jpg
LARGE VIEW

I reckon this is better!
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/b...N2-FRONT-1.jpg

Any thoughts in general?

You need to sort the joins out on the script font - it's meant to flow together. You might have to redraw some of it or at least mess with the letterspacing.

...and you may want to put a 40-odd% opacity black rectangle behind the text - I'm finding it a little confusing / cluttered with all the curves etc. of the text and the background picture.

I couldn't see the first one very well but the placement of the second looks OK.

oppp typo there, *70-odd% opacity

thanks guys