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    Logo critique needed.

    I'm designing a logo for a company called iNAUTICA. They sell sail yachts and in the future maybe motor yachts. This is my thinking so far. What do you guys think?

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    Considering the probable diversification into motor-powered yachts, is the sail device the best solution?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave L View Post
    Considering the probable diversification into motor-powered yachts, is the sail device the best solution?
    As it is only a maybe for the future, I have tried to subtly visualise a bow of the boat as well. It was a bit of a tricky task because they are still not sure on what direction they will take in the future.

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    Ahh - I didn't get that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave L View Post
    Ahh - I didn't get that.
    So you "bow" to his superior knowledge!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave L View Post
    Considering the probable diversification into motor-powered yachts, is the sail device the best solution?
    Aww damn, I was about to say I really liked it but you raise a REALLY good point there.
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    I do see the bow now it's pointed out but my first impression was definitely sails... perhaps something shaped a bit more like breaking waves at the bottom...?

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    Quote Originally Posted by linziloop View Post
    Aww damn, I was about to say I really liked it but you raise a REALLY good point there.
    Thanks Linzi, They dont actually sell motor boats yet and not 100% sure if they will so maybe it does have to be really subtle? As they don't sell them yet, I don't want to be sending the message that they do surely?

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    I like the concept but feel the device maybe needs to be more like a sail, i'm thinking moth at the moment, too symmetrical maybe? Isn't one sail usually a touch smaller?

    With regards to offering motorised in the future I don't think the logo has to depict every single product for 'sail' (see what i did there) and think the idea you have is fine, epecially if sail boats are their main product.

    Just my thoughts...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Boss Hog View Post
    I like the concept but feel the device maybe needs to be more like a sail, i'm thinking moth at the moment, too symmetrical maybe? Isn't one sail usually a touch smaller?

    With regards to offering motorised in the future I don't think the logo has to depict every single product for 'sail' (see what i did there) and think the idea you have is fine, epecially if sail boats are their main product.

    Just my thoughts...
    Yeah one sail is usually smaller than the other, good point Bosshog!
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