Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast
Results 1 to 10 of 18
  1. #1
    Senior Member bigdave's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    York
    Posts
    847
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 12 Times in 6 Posts

    Not so much a crit more a cry for help...

    I've picked up a little branding job (woohoo). It's more of an artworking job as the clients have been very specific about colours, content font styles etc.. As it's a fairly low budget job I'm not really inclined to spend too much time an effort dissuading them so have pretty much just gone along with the brief. Usually when the client's been really specific, I can put it together and say it's X Y & Z that are ruining this, but on this occasion, there's something that makes me tilt my head to the side and slightly screw my face up but I cant for the life of me work out what! It's driving me mad!

    www.bleedink.co.uk York based web, design and print

  2. #2
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Location
    Wilts
    Posts
    152
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Disney might not like the tinkerbell silhouette!?
    And don't get me started about taste...

  3. #3
    Senior Member bigdave's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    York
    Posts
    847
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 12 Times in 6 Posts
    It's based on tinkerbell as those were the instructions from the client but is a completely original vector.

    As for taste, You and I both know it looks like a kids party but it's what the client wants so what can I do.
    www.bleedink.co.uk York based web, design and print

  4. #4
    Senior Member bigdave's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    York
    Posts
    847
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 12 Times in 6 Posts
    If people are looking at the fairy and immediately assume I've just ripped off Disney, then perhaps the fairy needs more work to move her away from that?..
    www.bleedink.co.uk York based web, design and print

  5. #5
    Moderator Corrosive's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2010
    Location
    Bristol, UK
    Posts
    980
    Thanks
    18
    Thanked 27 Times in 20 Posts
    Quote Originally Posted by bigdave View Post
    If people are looking at the fairy and immediately assume I've just ripped off Disney, then perhaps the fairy needs more work to move her away from that?..
    I think you are far enough away from the classic Tinkerbell silhouette to be OK (can't believe I just typed that sentence).

  6. #6
    Moderator Minuteman Press's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Bristol, UK
    Posts
    1,227
    Thanks
    6
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    You seem to know a lot about it Corrosive!!!

  7. #7
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Location
    Wilts
    Posts
    152
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    It said tinkerbell to me...I don't know what that says? Disney are rotweilers when it comes to IP.

  8. #8
    djb
    djb is offline
    Senior Member djb's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2010
    Location
    Farnham, Surrey
    Posts
    347
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    I thought Tinkerbell too. I suspect the font is making your eyes go a bit squiffy. Have you tried it with the stars in front of the letters - perhaps with a white fill?

  9. #9
    Moderator Corrosive's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2010
    Location
    Bristol, UK
    Posts
    980
    Thanks
    18
    Thanked 27 Times in 20 Posts
    Quote Originally Posted by Minuteman Press View Post
    You seem to know a lot about it Corrosive!!!
    Yeah, fair comment. A friend of ours runs a children's party business and someone else did the logo for her in a very similar way so been round that loop once or twice. And obviously a massive Disney fan

  10. #10
    Senior Member bigdave's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    York
    Posts
    847
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 12 Times in 6 Posts
    Thanks for the opinions guys. Think some work on the fairy is certainly needed. I hate the font but it seems to be the most legible scripted font in my collection. I might have a rake through some discs this aft and see if I can find any others.
    www.bleedink.co.uk York based web, design and print

Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. Logo Crit Please. Thanks
    By Esh in forum Graphic Design Critique:
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: 11-19-2010, 09:00 PM
  2. PDF Crit
    By olirushworth in forum Graphic Design Critique:
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: 06-16-2010, 09:26 AM
  3. logo crit
    By rachaelbethany in forum Graphic Design Critique:
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 05-20-2010, 01:12 AM
  4. Logo Crit again please
    By CYoung in forum Graphic Design Critique:
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 03-30-2009, 06:17 PM
  5. Logo crit please
    By theking79 in forum Graphic Design Critique:
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: 03-20-2009, 08:33 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •