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    Critique on Logo and advice

    Hi All

    This is my logo, just looking for some comments on it. how obvious is it representing a N and V??


    FYI: the curves are crap because I still suck at the pen tool and practising it.
    the word 'designs' will be placed under the logo at the end, in a similar font.


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    I get worm vomiting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Minuteman Press View Post
    I get worm vomiting.
    Coz of the orange, was a bad idea


    how about now?

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    Agree with Minuteman, even with the blue it still looks like a worm vomiting. The N and V are not obvious, is the any reason for the curves? Otherwise you could get a merged V & N symbol just using a font.

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    Still vomit I'm afraid.

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    I think this is one of those times where you need to leave the computer and start going back to basics , pen , pencils and paper. This needs to be reworked from stratch as its not working.

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    I don't see the logo????

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    Quote Originally Posted by graphicbreeze View Post
    I don't see the logo????
    Ill upload that one again today around 4pm, but I went back to the drawing board and got 3 for you.




    what do you all think about these 3?

    or maybe better advice on improving the first one, as thats my favourite, but I cant have people thinking 'Vomiting Worm' when they think of me, lol

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    Hey, yeah like everyone else i'm not into the worm so much xD
    Out of the three you just posted though, the second is my favourite and is more 'readable' than the others. The only thing that I can see wrong at the moment is the 'V' looks kinda like a 'U', which is probably because of the font you've used!

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    I didn't use fonts, I could cut the corner on the left and see how that looks, I can see everyone likin the middle now, as it's my third choice, first design being first.

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