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    Logo Concept

    Here's the first of many concepts!

    What do you think?


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    I like the idea of the symbol and I think the text looks smart - can never quite put my finger on why but it has that modern look that so many seem to have these days of which I'm a fan.

    The thing that sticks out at me though is that I feel as though the gap between Kyle and the K symbol is too wide, it just feels like it's gaping out at me like a sore thumb, particularly when the N on the right hand side is tighter to it.

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    The 'k' isn't entirely apparent and I read the 'n' as a 'p' (looks like 'LLP' to me). Also not crazy about the way it balances.

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    I'll have to disagree with you there BigDave!

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    Although maybe the 'N' could do with a bit of refinement.

    Cheers dedward p, Still only a concept at the moment, alot of rough edges to work on
    I was inspired by a Bauhaus piece I saw and adapted it into something of my own.

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    Hey! We all see things differently. It's definitely a 'p' though ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave L View Post
    Hey! We all see things differently. It's definitely a 'p' though ...
    I don't know why but i always get drawn to the name first, then to the graphic.
    That's why I see it as 'N'. I think this is easily solved.

    Does the name come after for everyone else?
    Am I alone here? haha

    Cheers

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    What if the left hand side of the N was brought up so that it was level with the bottom of both the K and the right hand side of the N?

    That way, the N wouldn't be mistaken for a P and also the gap would be removed helping the balance?

    Just a thought.

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    The name comes for me first too.
    I really like the idea, however, it still does look like a P if you're looking at it without reading the name.
    What Deadwarp said there about changing the shape of it helping the balancing. I agree with that, the footprint of the whole thing is pretty huge?

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    Thanks for the sound advice, here's an updated version!

    Last edited by TheNoone; 03-16-2011 at 12:10 AM.

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