Thread: Feedback please :)

Would you be able to upload a larger version of the homepage visual as it's too small to view at this size?

Ok no problem

could you make the jpeg around 700 or 800 pixels high?

My old eyes don't work too well :)

ha ok i am just figuring out how to do it :)

Sorry about that guys I have set up a Flickr account so that you can view it better :)

http://www.flickr.com/photos/59354513@N03/5433427142/

I still feel the Logo needs a little bit of work as it looks a little dated.

I would start by making the M&M and the Direct underneath the same width and try placing all the text into the swing tag, to make it all one complete logo not two different elements.

And maybe try using rounded corners on the swing tag, as this should make the design appear more modern.

Hi

It's got a lot better but the most glaringly obvious thing is - the company is M and M not M&M.

I think you still have a bit of work to do though; i'd agree with a previous post and look more into teh typography approach.

Good luck :icon_thumbup:

Originally Posted by Kezzer

Hi guys

As my assignment was to re brand this company I have also created a visual of a homepage because I thought the original web site was cluttered and far to busy. I am happy with the outcome of both logo and Homepage visual and I have also considered how I would create the glow around the images if I had to build this web page in Dreamweaver. On that point I am going to create a another visual just to improve that part of the homepage because I think it would create more work for something that I could keep simple.

As I need to do an evaluation of my work it would be useful to get some final feedback from you guys because you have give me so much help so far which has enabled me to improve.

Over to you and thanks for your input good or bad it all helps me to evaluate my work.

I was about to post how much i liked the first try (which was only spoilt by the wording for me)

BUT, having seen what you did in the last iteration, its very good (although I am no expert.)