Thread: Poster for college gig I'm doing.

Rip it Up and Start Again - Orange Juice

Just kidding.

What would I do?

1. Lose the musical notation symbols from the graphic (can you use it upside down like that?) and make the whole image a bit smaller (or otherwise relatively respace the image and text above/below)
2. Put the capitalization back in the song titles (I think it's appropriate in this context)
3. Lose the word 'cost'
4. lowercase 'p' for 'proceeds'.

Originally Posted by SparkCreative

That, for me is starting to work a little better.

Too many comments so I've done a chop job on it. It's by no means perfect, but I'm trying to show you what I mean about filling the space. I've also reduced the copy a bit and made it into only two type sizes instead of loads - keep it simpler. The one other thing I'd do it put the main heading back into the original font in upper and lowercase - I think it looks a bit incongruous now.

Yeah - the type layout's much better there, though maybe something clearer than a doublespace to seperate titles on the same line.

If I remove the bass and treble clef heart then the image become phallic and no you can't use a treble clef upside down but it wouldn't look like a heart otherwise.

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/818...cinthehacz.png

it's definitely looking better I would say.