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    first logo

    The logo is for coffee company in Kenia.
    This is a design for cofee company. The target market is young student between 21-25
    years old. The cofee is organic sustainable- it is important part of the brand, but the clien dont want to look stereo typically green. I have just 5 days for that and the budjet is tight. Would you help me with advice please. The logo can not contant any graphics.Thank you:)
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    Is that font comic sans?

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    I can not understand what you mean...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Boss Hog View Post
    Is that font comic sans?
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    Yes it is :), Sorry I misunderstood in the begining:(

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    I'll be honest I think it looks amateur, don't really have anything constructive to say other than start again unfortunately, sorry. Look at other companies in the same industry to get some ideas and try again, logo design isn't something that can be rushed in a few days.

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    Thank you for advice :).i will start work again on that logo::)

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    Quote Originally Posted by mimoza_79 View Post
    The logo is for coffee company in Kenia.
    This is a design for cofee company. The target market is young student between 21-25
    years old. The cofee is organic sustainable- it is important part of the brand, but the clien dont want to look stereo typically green. I have just 5 days for that and the budjet is tight. Would you help me with advice please. The logo can not contant any graphics.Thank you:)
    Hey mimoza_79,

    I'm guessing this isn't for a real company, is this for a project at school\college?

    You say there is a tight budget only 5 days to produce a logo that doesn't use graphics and want advise? and also I find it hard to believe a coffee company would be targeting that specific group (but I get surprised about things all the time)

    First...if the design brief states don't use graphics "DON'T use graphics" you have those (what look like orange and lime slices) between the words...get rid of them.

    Change the type face, it will never be taken seriously

    My advise is that in order to produce a good logo you need a lot more time and if it is a real client they need to factor this time into whatever time frame they are (presumably) working on :)

    Research...start by searching for coffee company logos and see what type they use.

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    This is for school project :). I try to rework but hopefully these are better :)

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