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    Farm Shop Logo Design feed Back

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    I am currently working on a logo design for a Farm Shop. Any feedback would be great thanks.....
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    It’s nice, but I wonder whether the trees which touch the house are making it a bit complicated. Also the front wheel of the tractor looks a bit disconnected and both wheels are see-through (alloys?).

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    Id sort out the front wheel mate. Other than that, its a good design

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    I'd agree with the comments above. One other thing is how legible it is when it is reduced in size. The namestyle might be ok but I'm wondering if the rest of the logo just merges together at a smaller size.

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    i like the design, but i agree with other posters that it might not be legible when its smaller. This image looks like it would be great on a sign, but i can see it as a letterhead or on a b-card. you know what i mean?

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    Looks nice (and particularly farm-shoppy). I think if the small version in the image is the minimum size then it's fine and the very minor front wheel of the tractor issue would be easily corrected by tilting the front of the tractor down a bit so that the two overlap.

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    Hi,

    thanks for all your feedback. I will work on the logo and make some of the suggested fixes.

    thanks again :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by gsmedia View Post
    Hi,

    I am currently working on a logo design for a Farm Shop. Any feedback would be great thanks.....
    Hey gsmedia,

    Looks good, maybe less is better though?

    For me all you need is the tractor on the right (with the fixed front wheel) and cow on the left (maybe a smaller cow next to it) You don't need the trees clouds and birds to show that this is a farm and as others have said it could merge together on smaller sizes.

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    It's waaaaay too complicated. Simplify.
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    Quote Originally Posted by SparkCreative View Post
    It's waaaaay too complicated. Simplify.
    I'd agree with this if we were in a different context but for a farm shop I think the folksy homemade feel is spot on and the higher-level design value is in the well-balanced execution.

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