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    Evolve Gamer Crtique



    Evolve Gamer is my logo for my portfolio site, I am wondering if I should setup a team and go into this that way or continue doing freelance projects?

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    One suggestion, align the '.com' to the baseline of evolve gamer,it just looks like it's floating a bit.

    Otherwise, really like it a lot!

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    Oh yeah! Thanks alot Suzy :) Comment appreciated!

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    Altered the floating 'com'

    Changed the | section

    Added subtle graidents to the lettering

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    Brilliant! Great logo, other deisgners at work think so too :D

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    Quote Originally Posted by suzyq84s View Post
    Brilliant! Great logo, other deisgners at work think so too :D

    Agreed!

    Nice work, all the critique that I had in mine was taken care of by suzy

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    Very nice logo. So what sort of thing is this logo aimed at? Online gaming or board games etc? Looking very nice though, very impressed.

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    Buissness Cards

    Its a two man team but really just a cover name for me to brand my projects + a portfolio peice

    What you guys think of the buissness cards i've designed





    ( Theres probablly a trillion things wrong with it, but if it was left upto me entirely, I would of gone with all typography and minimal colour )

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    Unfortuneatly, I am not a print guy and came up against the same problem when I was looking to create business cards lol. However I would personally go for adding a little more design to the background being a designers business card. Alternatively a picture of yourself seems to work well.

    My only other comment would be to give the business a little more alignment as it currently looks a little all over the place and nothing flows quite right. Perhaps left align the logo / your name etc and right align the contact details?

    Just an idea and only trying to help. Someone in the print area may be able to comment a little better on this?

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    Great logo, naff business card mate! Sorry!

    I would not use the italics, and just stick with the book/regular font. Plus don't just centre everything, if you wanted to be really flashy try getting the first 'E' die cut?

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